If you go to Salem there is only one stop you have to make sure to make, Pop Jackson's. Pop's is the greasiest of greasy spoon. The first time I was in there the waitress took our drink order, all Mountain Dews, went to the register, grabbed a handful of quarters, then walked to the pop maching in the back of the restaurant. My favorite item is the Monster Burger, there are four of them accompanied by fresh cut fries in this picture. We had the waitress take this, and somehow she didn't deem it necessay to get all four of us in the shot. No harm, the burger is the real star here anyway.
Falling into the too much of a good thing category was the return 2 am trip for breakfast, and in some cases more burgers. At this point I was having 3 totally different arguement with three different people at the table. I can't really get into it but my favorite was Stemmy getting mad at Ron and I for arguing while he was ordering because we know people can't understand him as it is, let alone when were yelling back and forth in front of him. 
Brendan not only drove us back at the end of the night, he also picked up the tab. Thanks B.J. I hope we can get plans for this Fall's Fleaves finalized soon.
4 comments:
Is no post safe?
1) You wrote: "My favorite item is the Monster Burger, there are four of them accompanied by fresh cut fries in this picture." Caption correct, grammar incorrect. This is 2 ideas that need to be sepeerated by either a hyphen, a semi-colon or a period. These are 2 complete sentences on their own, so I recommend a period.
2) 2 am is gibberish, a number followed by a verb. 2 AM or 2 a.m. or 2 A.M. are likely best; even using 2 in the morning is fine.
3) arguement is not a word; argument is what you were searching that bleach-blond head for.
4) You wrote: "...let alone when were yelling back and..."; you of course meant we're, a contraction of the words we and are.
5) Perhaps some can find fault with the first sentence of the blog and the last sentence of paragraph 2 needing hyphens for those commas;
using 3 and three in the same sentence, both times describing nouns (arguments and people)- the moral here is to keep it uniform using only numbers or only words;
and an extra period after "B.J." to end the sentence though this last idea is debatable in my eyes.
Bye for now.
I recommend you explain what the hell "sepeerated" means.
Again, I was a little more diligent at the beginning of this process, then decided, "Fer What?"
And by pointing out a spelling error, you have earned yourself another week of "Breakin' Balls 2: Electric Blogaloo Editing"
You sir, did the exact same thing. Again little touchy?
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